Red Fragile

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Red Fragile

What u think of my dark gothic poetry?

Dark love
==========

It is a night of sorrow, a song of dark desire,
wolves vent their loneliness. The beautiful one
awakes.

Wisps of death shrouds her deathly form,
a timeless fear.

Her raven hair cascades over
fragile milk-white shoulders, and her
full red lips part slightly, to taste the
soul streaming from the
pale flesh beneath
her.

Now a night of sharing,
I remember her.

I love the subject matter, I love the way you write and you are talented. That being said the only thing I can say is it should flow a little better. I have the same problem. Can't see the forest for the trees. Read it aloud to yourself and see if it flows. If not make a few adjsutments. Don't change much though I love dark poetry and you seem to also. /good job and Good luck.

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